Thread:Owerslachlan/@comment-34934380-20190915090543/@comment-40147293-20190917013241

Dinoanime7 wrote: Yeah, it literally sees them. Because the baby started crying, and also because they chose to stand directly in the window, almost as if they was hunks of meat at a butchers shop behind the sneeze gaurd glass.

I get why they would stand and stare at the mini triceratops, because its beaitiful and friendly, but when a 9 foot allosaures shows up, whats the FIRST thing a NORMAL human would do?

Lights out, curtains drawn, take the baby out the baby chair and hit the freeking deck and HOPE it moves on.

But no, the  writers  were too lazy to think of an alternative way that the Allo could get drawn to them so they chose the standard baby crying cop out.

'' Hey...babys cry right? well, how about this baby crys and THATS how it finds them, omg im so clever, I mean im sure the parents would cover the kids mouth but screw that, i got some suspence to write! im soooooooo smart ''

Why not have a cell phone in the dudes pocket ring? People oftebn forget they have active cell phones in their pockets! That would have been way more believable, or hell if they insist onusing kids like in ALL JP films, why not have the kid make a noise with an eletronic toy? They can turn off a cell phone or a toy, but at that point the Allo would be aware of them.

Its the laziest writing you can think of, I dont know the lady that wrote this garbage, but I remeber hearing that Trevorrow was singiong her praises, giving her writing all kinds of compliments and thats why he sanctioned this short film and let  her write it....I bet if i googled her she is a BEAUTIFUL woman....that would explain it.