Thread:PrimevalNerd/@comment-2118191-20180612133639

I have corrected your edit to Stygimoloch because you wrote it like this...

"An individual named Stiggy plays a role in the film. Where he saves Owen and Claire."

...when you should have written it like this.

"An individual named Stiggy plays a role in the film, where she saves Owen Grady and Claire Dearing."

Where is the continuation of a sentence, and thus should have had a comma in front of it. Stiggy is a female, and because this was the first mention of Owen and Claire, their full names should be used.

Also, I removed the part in Mosasaurus where you wrote "The last we see of it", because that's incorrect. You shouldn't refer to the readers as "we". 