Thread:Twdg Randall 66/@comment-2118191-20180704181412

Just offering a word of advice - I fixed up your Maisie Lockwood (Original) article, because there were a few things that bugged me. Let me offer you the following advice.


 * I noticed you used the "standard layout" option to create the page, but subsequently did not delete the headings or picture placeholders. If you're not going to add them, I'd seriously advise either deleting them, or just making a blank page article. It makes it look far less messy.
 * As a general rule, the topic of the page should be introduced in bold letters. So, Maisie Lockwood instead of just Maisie.
 * Try to be a little more careful with how you write your verbs. They need to be in the past tense - you wrote "the prototype use to create an exact clone copy also call Maisie", but that is grammatically incorrect. The correct way is "the prototype used to create an exact clone copy also called Maisie". I've noticed you keep missing the "d" or "ed" off the end of verbs, you need to be careful.
 * Proof-read your work and ask if you're unsure. That's probably the best advice I can give.

If you have any more questions, feel free to ask. 