This took a lost less time for me to make then the other stories. I didnt have as much fun writting this as the other rewrites but it was still enjoyable. I do want to here your opinions.
This took a lost less time for me to make then the other stories. I didnt have as much fun writting this as the other rewrites but it was still enjoyable. I do want to here your opinions.
Yeah ok fair enough thanks for the criticism. Im going to try to do a battle at big rock style story focusing on an encouter with dinosaurs in the wild.
Or make your own battle story
Well... Yes Messy grammar and punctuation made the story hard to read... Overall the story was good.. but I liked your jp3 remake more
The question is what dinosaurs?
@Rose Blackie i did also have more fun writing jp 3 because it felt like their was a bunch of intresting ways the story could go. Jw for the most part has animals in captivitey so i felt their was less oportunities for new action scenes. And theirs the fact that jw is a solid film which in my opinion didnt need much improvement.
Apatosaurus vs carnotaurus
Ok you know what im going to remake my remake with better grammar and new creatures.
I have added a few more dinosaurs and tried my best to fix my grammar. I do appologise for calling gray " grey " that must have been painful to read.
Now it's easy to read đź‘Ťđź‘Ť Eagerly waiting for your fallen kingdom remake... Will you change indoraptor there also?
Made my own fan-fiction, it is short but I think you guys might enjoy it. It is a thriller based off of the The Lost World and is a story about two men who encounter a group of ancient monsters. It is partially in Spanish but even if you don't understand or know Spanish you should be able to understand the story!
https://jpfanon.fandom.com/wiki/The_Lost_World:_Epilogue
What do you think?