Jurassic World: Rebirth

The beginning scene would be in 2011 not 2010, we would see some species from the island like the titanosaurus and ankylosaurus with some additions like hypsilophodon, kentrosaurus, plesiosaurus and dentaneosuchus, there would be also some references that incidents had happend in that island like seeing the raptor paddock(containing raptors with the same model as the JP3 ones) had a broken car and a human skeleton.

The beginning scene will also have Henry Wu seeing the experiment results from the Distortus Rex(being a rex with too much frog dna and with the addition of the ambar mosquito dna, this D.rex extra arms would look more like frog feet and would have extra pupils around it's eye, consequence of it's mosquito DNA, it's just his Hellraptor fanart) the mutadons with a more gargoyle-like redesign(a hybrid experiment having two variants, the alpha that is similar to the mutadon with multiple heads and the normal that are like the original movie), deformed dead dinos (included the two-headed raptor and the two-headed triceratops and other deformities of dinosaurs like a three-legged gallimimus with no arms or a wingless dimorphodon), we would also see other mutants but I'm gonna talk about them later, the important part is that Wu would see that his results of trying to make hybrids or dinosaurs with new features like Masrani wants except for one, the scorpios rex( yes we would have a live action scorpios rex in this version, at least as a baby) because it had the characteristics that Masrani wanted but because they were distracted the team that was going to monitor the D.rex the snicker part would happen while Wu and the Scorpios abandoned the island to go to Nublar.

The D.rex incident would be more terrifying because it was fast, had a frog tongue and a mosquito stinger that was too large, it would kill the majority of scientist that enter but we would see some reasons why this D.rex is suffering: Has all the respiratory problems of a pug, his tongue and stinger capacities hurt each other and can't control it because of his crossed instincts, it also vomits a lot and ain't that fast because it has too much weights above his neck and head. Also the dead of the snicker guy would be very grotesque comparing to some deaths in attack on titan, they would again contain it but we all know that he will escape eventually.

Instead of having text explaining what happen to the mainland dinos, a video like the beginning of Dominion that would explain this many dinosaurs couldn't adapt to all mainland biomes so dinosaurs started to migrate to the equatorial line especially the Ingen clones, in that part we would see a recreation of the nasutoceratops migration from jw chaos theory, but even if not all dinosaurs and other creatures adapted to the mainland habitats many others adapt to some specific biomes of the world and new generations created illegally or by BioSyn didn't had problems, causing the creation of multiple dinosaur sanctuaries around the world and even dinosaurs in common zoos, until it happened, the DX disease, a virus originated on Sorna it was originally harmless that Ingen didn't make a vaccine until it evolded in the mainland becoming a killing sentence to any creature that got infected causing hives on the skin and heart problems, we would see some of the victims of the DX like the Jurassic World Rebirth toyline barionyx, nasutoceratops and therizinosaurus, it was so mortal that from the 50 sanctuaries in North America (30 in USA and 20 on Canada) only the Yosemite National Park survive where we would see the dinosaurs that we can find in there in the JWE2 with the addition of Blue, Beta and Rexy, but it wasn't lost because around the equator the virus was incapable to prosper letting to dinosaurs living in the wild, zoos, sanctuaries and obviously islands, because of the situation many governments with the dinosaurs they decided to send many of the survivors to isolated islands or plateous or to zoos and sanctuaries, in that part we would see Bumpy and Smoothie are in Africam Safari, Mexico with a Barionyx, stegosaurus and some moros intrepidus and in the Veracruz Aquarium we would see living with the dolphins a plesiosaurus and we would see again the dinosaurs that live on Senegal and the last thing about this we would see how the dominion parasaurolophus ended in Ile Saint-Hubert with other 4 species that I'm gonna mention later. That information would be complemented in the museum video explaining it better and adding the information that many species because of there isolation or because non of them where infected were capable of surviving out of the equator like what happened on Yosemite like Lystrosaurus living in the Sahara desert or the JP3 Spinosaurus with ouranosaurus, kentrosaurus, and allosaurus around the Nile river and the most curious the Patagonia, we would see carnotaurus, iguanodon, chubutisaurus, two ro three new giganotosaurus, tapejara, dreadnoughtus and the most curious was the titanosaurus that didn't had sails nor stripes.

In the apatosaurus death scene we would see circuling like vultures some teenager quetzalcoatlus(the sons of the Dominion Quetzalcoatlus that where living on NY) around the apatosaurus and when it collapse all quetzals attack simultaneosly the apatosaurus ending him, in the moment one of the policeman would scream not again implying that the other dinosaurs referenced to live in zoos in NY where killed by them also implying that Quetzalcoatlus is inmune to the DX, Zora's motivations in this version are different initiating just for mobey but evolving later in devotion to her death mother. In the museum scene we would know that there are multiple mosasaurs, the Ile Saint-Hubert Quetzalcoatlus is a Quetzalcoatlus lawsoni and the reason why they go specifically on that island is because is the only place in the world where the three biggest cloned species coexist because there are multiple mosas in the equatorial line, dominion quetz live all around the world and out of Ile Saint-Hubert titanosaurus only lives in the Patagonia.

The explanation of multiple mosas is the black market cloning and that Ile Saint-Hubert has three of them

The reasons of the characters to join the missions would be almost the same but with more characterization and interaction like Nina being close to LeClerc, about the motivations, the DNA samples is for a DX cure that has jumped into animals, affecting the meat production so for the moment they think that they just are going to save some animals from dying, without knowing the real reason that is that the virus already jump to humans, resulting that Mr. Parker( The owner of Parker-Genix) is infected and want a cure for himself and Dr. Henry Loomis is also infected, that's why he wants the cure for being public for saving everyone that is infected like himself but been in capable of explaining it to the rest of the team because he also wants to save the dinosaurs and mae them extend again, his ments in the version are know heart medicine.

The public doesn't got bored with dinosaurs, what happen is that now they prefered to go on vacation to Mexico ot go to Yosemit, instead of a museum, basically what says Alan Grant in a deleted scene of dominion.

The movie would have more character developing and would have a theme similar to The Lost World novel instead of the movie version.

In Suriname, we would see more pteranodons in the bird cages but instead of Loomis been attracted by this pterosaurs he would be attracted for a dinosaur that was in a bird cage, the Archaeopteryx, later when Duncan signals the Megalodon jaw we would hear the Jaws music, when they abandon the port we would see some Stetacanthus swimming in the water until one of them is hunted by an alive Dunkleosteus. Duncan past would be changed a little adding that he's wife is also dead.

I'm keeping the family in the movie but using it as a form of redention arc for Duncan's past, the family would still be attacked by a mosasaur and two spinosarus but in this version the three animals are different specimens from the others that we see in the movie (yeah there's a second mosa); during the night of Zora and Duncan conversation everyone would take a break when various styxosaurus get near the ship giving us a beautiful scene because they are bioluminiscent like in JWE2, later when they are almost in the island we would see tapejaras flying around until one tries to take a fish but from the water is attacked by a torvoneustes seeing it repeated in other occasions, later before they respond the SOS from the family it's revealed that the mosasaurus (but the one that they extract the DNA and the one that attacked the family) was freed in the island not a week after it born so seeing that this predators where near where the mosasurus babies where freed would raise the question about how they survived. When they rescue the family is when they realize there's two mosasaurus and later they discover there are really three on the island, the one from the original film, the one that attacked the family and an older one that lives in the north of the island, the sequence of the movie would remain almost the same just that there would be a massive revelation about the mosasaurus-spinosaurus relationship, the spinosaurus have a father-like relationship with the duo of mosasaurus, they will discover that seeing how they threat each other also explaining why the mosasaurus have a different behaviour from the one of the previous trilogy and the one from the north, also the spinosaurus that kills Nina is the 5th spinosaurus and when the ship is stranded before it crashed we would see that in the place a group of nothosaurus with their camp cretaceous are resting only for running for their lives when the Ajax crashes in the beach, the other two with the second mosa are the 6th and the 7th. The last change in this part would be the explanation of what is happening on the island, it was a Masrani and InGen research facility where they test what they can do, what traits they can give to the animals and would be the initial place of research of genetical hybridation in dinosaurs, that's why this spinosaurus are more like the one from jurassic world (yeah, I'm canonizing the theory that the spino skeleton of Jurassic World was a new spinosaurus that they'd years ago but was excivited) instead from the Sorna spinosaurus and his illegal clones (yeah, this would be a dialogue), this would explain the differences between the spinosaurus and also explaining some characteristics of the dinosaurs on the island, from colors to extra characteristics like with the titanosaurus. The last addition of this part would be that around the movie we will see the miscellaneous hybrids that where inside Wu's Lab in Jurassic World like the feathered caiman lizard, also from this beginning th D.rex would be teased by saying that in the interior of the island there must be a bigger predator because this spinos are hunting in the sea instead from the rivers and swamps on the island.

This is the first new scene of the rewrite an is the spinosaurus vs triceratops scene but with a twist, when they start to escape from the coast instead of going to the family they will reach the top encountering a triceratops stampede where one of the triceratops is killed by the predator that initiated it, but instead of being a new dinosaur it would be other triceratops, one of the mutants that I didn't mentioned, an experiment to know how does a carnivore with herbivore complection would develop in his life, his design is basically an old art of hellraptor of Jurassic Park x Resident Evil that has a carnivorous triceratops, obviously it would chase the protagonist almost killing them before the spinosaurus arrive and fight the mutant triceratops, it end up with a spino without one arm and the 5th spino being impaled by the mutant, the triceratops end up also dead thanks to team work between the spinosaurus and the arrival of a "bull" triceratops (a male) that came to kill the mutant.

Going back with the family, when they watch a dinosaur passing in the jungle, in this version it would be possible to see the complete animal, in this case a diabloceratops, it would stop to see the family in surprise for later continue he's path; when they follow the pipes they wouldn't notice two things, in a tree we could see a pyroraptor that instead of attack the family look to be tracking something and a dead sauropod(maybe an apatosaur or a titanosaur) having been turn apart by something big and now was being eaten or by a tyrannotitan or by the subject-028, a rex with hammerhead shark and bat DNA (who is this? well, Jaroslav Kosmina, there was a official contest of Jurassic World that gave especific DNA combination for hybrids and well the winners where made Jaroslav Kosmina becoming official with the extra that he became part of the concept art team of JWFK, here is the link to a video that explain it better, the problem is that is in spanish: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hlSn6DOJC00) or a carnivorous maiasaura full of tumors.

Going back with the main group in the swamp, we would see the lampreys directly trying to attack the group but been easily defeated by been squashed, we would also see some achillobators drinking there and it would be see some ceoptera flying around, the conversation between Martin Krebbs and Henry Loomis would change because of the change in the disappearance of dinosaurs adding that in the artic the DX also can't affect dinosaurs but their problem was the food source, there wasn't enough artic based species of big herbivores for been a food saurce for the artic carnivores and can't hunt the modern herbivores because they are protected by the government making them they from estarvation, the next would be a Dr. Henry Loomis dialogue: "That's why Yutyrannus is almost extinct and leaellynasaura has merched with the modern wildlife, the others has been sent to places like this(signaling a tree where a a chamaleon with a thumb is hunted again by a pyroraptor)" (yeah the yuti will be namedropped referencing the ideas of David Koepp for Rebirth), we would see a parasaurolophus drinking water but started to be hunted by something that wasn't in the water but looked to be feat to live in there, a dentaneosuchus, the para escapes so the dentaneosuchus starts to search in the swamp for something to eat when the group is about to go out from the swamp they are attack by a giant sea serpent, a palaeophis, it almost get our protagonist but the dentaneosuchus attacks the palaeophis intitiating a battle that the snake would win because the dentaneosuchus is design for earth, not for water like modern crocodiles (the reason I use this two is because this movie doesn't have the space for a titanoboa or a purussaurus), we would also see during these scene some ichthyostegas, juvenile diplocaulus and a secodontosaurus. In the helicopter part he would see that also old trees are broken near it, the helicopter is also accompanied by a cut titanic rotten tongue around it, also inside the helicopter we would see again the ceoptera, what are the rest of the group doing? well, finding another mutant, a herd of subjet 057, pachycephalosaurus with escarabag and seahorse DNA, this creature would surprise Dr. Loomis seeing the horrors that where did in these island noticing that are more docile than the normal dinosaur, they also can grab there food with his extra limbs and see that they take care of their eggs like seahorse, this moment is cut when a squad of velociraptors(all male) and achillobators been led by no one esle but Red the atrociraptor killing three subject 057, the reason of his presence is that when the DX get into Europe many surviving dinosaurs where sent into equatorial isolated places for not been infected and the surviving atrociraptor squad where sent to this island, their relation with the mutadons and the other raptors woulld be explain in no time.

We would see a bit more of the family path before the raft scene like the river with dinosaurs that I mentioned before or there encounter with a maiasaura herd with babies and how they protect themselves from raptor attacks, also they would a stegosaurus lux and the phosphorescent parasaurlophus and also extra scenes for have a better look to the pteranodon from TLW inside the Ille Saint Hubert, now in the raft scene the t.rex would be clearly a female because she lives in a next that curiously has titanic footprints that aren't of a male t.rex, including the ones that should be of babies, there would be two dilophosaurs in the scene in this version including finally an adult of a bigger size of a raptor, the raft scene is manteined as the same just that we would see other dinosaurs near the river that had got not to much attention in this version also having cearadactylus on it only been saved when the rex finally passes the rocks but attack the pterosaurs.

There would be an interesting scene where the group gets into the raptors nest being comformed by velociraptors, pyroraptors, achillobators, extra atrociraptors, subjects 048(velociraptors with moray eel and great egret DNA),and the leaders of the pack, the atrociraptor squad evidently and a couple of utahraptors, something that they would notice is the low numbers of female velociraptors and other females of the other species and the ones that are there are being watched and protected by the rest of the pack, the nests are also protected by hardened clay, the group is almost saw by a subject 048 but it decide to go with the utahraptors, the atrociraptors and other dinos to another unknown for now place.

Before they watch for the first time the titanosaurus there would be various gallimimus rooming around before running when the titanosaurus tail appears, the titanosaurus would be of the size that we see in the movie but Loomis would notice their mutations, in this case their sails, in the scene we would see almost all the herbivores that I mentioned before in this scene with the addition of normal pachycephalosaurus, sinoceratops, archaeornithomimus and beipiaosaurus, everything would go normal until predators appear, a group of carnotaurus led by some mutant carnotaurus(this are not chamaleon carnotaurus, I'm not using them because they are to overpowered against humans), this carnos have large arms, overarticulated bodie, a prensil tail like monkies and a head that can go 360° like owls, also can climb and reorganize his bodyparts in case of impact so you can't broke their nakes, to have an idea of how they look, it would be like their funko pop for JWR, before the Quetzalcoatlus scene there would appear the doubt about how do the island hasn't collapse because the number of herbivores, obviously things like the mutant carnos can hunt all that meat but it wasn't enough so what where the alpha predators in this island then to contain the number of titanosaurus.

The Quetz scene would remain almost the same just that the dead of LeClerc would affect a lot Zora and Duncan and would start to expose Krebbs evilness, we would see more of the cearadactylus and the rest of the pterosaurs, except for the ceoptera and other pterosaur that would be in the end of the movie, we would see an abelisaurus in earth waiting for anyone of the group to fall but wasn't capable of founding Loomis inside the water, the compys still are in the scene.

The part of the swamp with the family, we would see adult diplocaulus and a herbivore that everyone wanted to see, edmontosaurus, wandering in the swamp, even a prionosuchus almost kills a baby edmonto but his mother crushed the prionosuchus but the biggest change is that in the swamp there is a skeleton of an adult t.rex, a male t.rex. We would see that in that swamp there was the 8th spinosaurus preparing to going for the family but someone appear in his path , the lab lockdown t.rex, one smaller than Freddy, a real sub-adult, they would fight and the spino almost kill it but something saves him, a 6.1 meters tall D.rex with his orginal movie design.

When the groups are already getting into the abandoned lab we would see that two mutant carnotaurus followed them into the place, the reunion would remain almost the same just that the reveal about the reason of the cure that I mentioned before and Loomis other reason for the mission and his insistence for the cure to not been patented, later before the mutadons appear, a squad of raptors led by Tiger would appear they prepared to attack the people but a subject 048 went to drink water and thanks to his moray DNA it could detect that something big was coming from the water but before warning the other dinos something titanic in the sky took it an eat him, an alpha mutadon, his appearance horrified the protagonist and the raptors, after it's appearance the male raptors started to launch screams of help for the rest of raptors that abandoned the nest came there for helping them, after that a total of ten mutadons like the ones from the movie would appear an attack the human and raptor group killing part of Tiger's squad almost ending him but an achillobator help him an they kill one of the mutadon, the raptor group became reduced and they where only capable of killing three mutadons so they hide because they can't escape from the mutadons thanks that they weren't alone, another type of mutadon with a cranium more similar to a velociraptor with non so useful wings because there arms are more similar to velociraptors causing two of them to die crashing against the floor and a structure, a less large tail and been more similar to the fanarts of the mutadon before it's reveal, this are crossed specimens between mutadons and female velociraptors oh yeah I'm revealing why they kidnap female velociraptors, in the beginning of the mutadons in the wild reproduction was too slow and dangerous because there wasn't enough female mutadons so when they make their nest into a cave in the top of a mountain they started to kidnapped female velociraptor to force reproduction with them letting to a big number of mutadons, both normals and the velociraptor like-craniums, almost causing the disappearance of velociraptors in the island if it wasn't because new ones and the other raptor species where sent to the island(yeah the mutadons are something like velociraptor r*pers), this part of the movie would go almost the same but with more mutadons and with atrociraptors, achillobators, subject 048, pyroraptors and velociraptors also on it fighting them, Henry and Duncan would found the laboratory learning what I explained about what experiments where made in the island and the names and origins of every mutant until they found the old D.rex enclosure, in that moment out of one of the doors we can see but the lab lockdown t.rex and the 6.1 meters tall D.rex passing by with the dead spinosaurus, the majority of mutadons die when the utahraptors and the rest of raptors get in the area only surviving the alpha and some of them that went into the sewers been followed by more raptors, the alpha mutadon was prepare to continue the battle and the rescue helicopter was arriving but it was grab and eaten by the beginning scene D.rex with his physical differences to the other one in this rewrite and the original, also it has now 25 meters tall.

It started to fight the alpha mutadon while the raptors escaped to the wilds or went into the sewers, it would have been the death of the alpha mutadon if it wasn't that one pyroraptor accidentally made three mutant carnotaurus come to the battle field bringing a more epic battle that started to go to the mountain, Krebbs is going to the raft while the protagonists are searching for the family, the reason that the last haven't died with all the carnivores in the sewers is because of Dolores that warns them from danger, Zora still would kill a mutadon but they would have problems with the raptors only been capable of surviving thanks that they give more attention to the mutadons the scene when they are going to escape from the sewers would almost stay the same just that Krebbs still doesn't dies by a D.rex still a second D.rex with his original design now with his official size appears waiting to attack until the raft scene t.rex appears, it looks that we will see a battle until the alpha mutadon with a head been rip off only having one and losing one of his wings but the one that gives the final punch would be the raft scene t.rex and after that it would interact with the original D.rex like with buck with Doe for lather interacting with the other two D.rexes and the lab lockdown t.rex because the three of them are her children while the humans escape for the boat not before that Martin Krebbs is trapped by the new D.rex dying like the original while the rest of his family fight and kill the mutant carnotaurus even the original D.rex reaping in half one of them with his extra arms, the raptors would slaughtered the last mutadons except for one of the velociraptor-cranium that had a broken wing and was trying to escape, but Red and the utahraptors would order the rest of raptors to not kill it because it would led to a terrestrial form to get into the mutadon nest(about the D.rex family, there was a couple of t.rex on the island when the D.rex, that is male, finally was free they already had an offspring, the lab lockdown rex, but the D.rex would fight with this other t.rex for the raft scene t.rex, the fight was won by the Distortus, it accepted the juvenile t.rex but still would reproduce with the adult t.rex originating the other two d.rexes that look more dinosaur than frog thanks to her mothers DNA).

The 8.1 meters D.rex would follow our protagonist that already have the briefcase while the rest fight the carnotaurus, the scene of Duncan's sacrifice would remain almost the same just that we would see how he escaped, throwing the flare and going into the water, the humans are finally out of that grotesque island but they aren't still safe because the third mosasaur that has the same size as the one of the previous trilogy is aproaching for the boat it all looks lost but we would start to hear the Jaws music we would start to see a titanic fin aproaching only to go into the water, the next thing they see is a megalodon attacking from below killing the mosaur in a similar form of the adult mosasaurus killed the younger one in primeval (yeah, that jaw in Suriname was foreshadowing like the fossils in the museum).

Everyone was finally safe, the end scene would almost go the same just with having Rhamphorhyncus flying around, when the dolphins appear there wouldn't be alone because with them there are multiple plesiosaurus giving us a beautiful end for the storie.

In this version we have a post credit scene where we see the raptor herd siege on the mutadon nest for the female velociraptors having an end similar to the kyoryu trailer, it could end with the extermination of mutadons or their assimilation to the group that could end with this pack going back into the continent joining more raptors including new species like Deinonychus and can end into a novel level raptor invasion in south America.